Review

So that was my first attempt at a short photo essay. Let it be made known that my camera battery died before I could get anymore :/ I had to have my charger shipped to me from home that's why it wasn't charged in advanced.
Anyway, The one thing I was worried about when posting was the writing. But as I look closer and ask people what they think several good critiques have surfaced:
-i needed more pictures (3 of each guy).
-I need a tripod.
-The photograph of Ian is "too contrived"- haha that is true and the fact that it sits by itself doesn't help- I feel that if it had been part of a series there would not have been a problem with it. (feel free to voice if you agree or disagree with that in comment form)
-Although good that I sited where I got my numbers from, I should have looked up a proper site format.
This is is the first of many hopefully. I feel that the main way in which I can get better and you be a "good friend" is if you clearly and honestly state your critiques. I value your opinions a lot (not an understatement_). Thanks!